Tuesday, February 7, 2012

Text for Editing Practice Part II

   In my opinion, I am agreement on music therapy is a good method for health. For instance, I have heard that doctor often advices people to hear some gentler music to keep gently. That makes a good environment to help people to ease anxiety, and helps sick cure quick.

In my opinion, music therapy is a good method for health cure. For instance, doctors often advise people to listen gentle music to keep gentle. That makes good environment to help people to ease anxiety and to be cured ill quickly.

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